So this is goodbye.
goodbye to yesterday.
goodbye to trying.
goodbye to failing.
goodbye to loving.
goodbye to hating.
goodbye to longing.
goodbye to chance.
goodbye to hope.
goodbye to all these thoughts.
goodbye to all these words.
goodbye to all the roses left outside your door.
goodbye to stringing along.
goodbye to not standing tall.
goodbye to all the hurt that forced me inside these walls.
I am saying goodbye to waiting
for something we knew wouldn’t happen.
I am saying goodbye to the balloons
that continued to float away further.
I am saying goodbye to the anchor
that forced me down and let me burn.
I am saying goodbye to all that I gave
for nothing in return.
I am saying goodbye to the hurt
that grew stronger everyday.
I am saying goodbye to the lies
that kept the truth locked away.
I am saying goodbye to the stories
I continued to convince myself with.
I am saying goodbye to forgiving
for all the things I never did.
Because I know now.
I know now that there is a world out there
that won’t push me aside and let me freeze in its winter.
I know now that there is a soul out there
that will not let mine quiver.
I know now that there is atmosphere out there
that will not hold down my breath nor dig me a grave.
I know now that there is a sky out there
that will allow me to soar with its wind for days.
I know that I am enough.
I know that I am worth a lot more than you let me believe.
I know that there is so much I deserve to achieve.
I know that I am stronger than the hurt you placed in my way.
I know that I can love without giving it away.
I know that I am not the one to blame for this fire.
I know that you were always the only liar.
I know that I can finally look into your eyes.
I know that I can finally smile from within and rise.
So this is me smiling at all your hate.
And this is me rising above all the weight.
This is me saying it to your face.
That,
This is my goodbye to you.
This is my goodbye to us.
alynav
November 12, 2019 — 9:21 pm
Dear Maira,
I love this piece! It was my first time reading any of your writing and I wish I read more earlier! I think especially in this piece, your voice was really evident and I cannot wait to read more of your pieces! I really loved this piece; the subject matter and perspective you wrote about is not only important, but something hard to put into words that would do the feeling justice and I think you did it beautifully.
For improvements, all I can really say is to edit formatting so each line looks the same editing wise! For certain lines, I felt the repetition of certain words became redundant, for example, “I know now that there is a world out there
/that won’t push me aside and let me freeze in its winter. / I know now that there is a soul out there/that will not let mine quiver.” This was just personal opinion and I totally understand if there was an intended purpose behind it!
All in all Maira, I love your writing and I cannot wait to read more of your pieces!
From,
Alyna